Notes that make your script better. Not nicer.
Most contests and services that say they’ll help writers are nonsense — you spend a lot and get very little back. I’ve been there. So I built packages I’d actually want: honest, specific reads from a working TV writer, with real turnaround times and no filler.
Not everyone has Hollywood friends who’ll read for free — much less ones who’ll fix your commas, punch up your jokes, and change “an” to “a.” That’s the gig.
Pick your package
TV up to 70 pages or film up to 130. Choose the level of notes you actually need.
I read it closely
Across 10 pillars: concept, structure, plot, pacing, characters, dialogue, tone, conflict, emotional response & marketplace potential.
You get real notes
A written breakdown you can act on. 3–5 business days — 24-hour turnaround available.
The packages
In-depth line-by-line proofreading, punch-ups and formatting changes. Editing services, no major notes.
Full read plus a 3-page breakdown across 5 pillars of your choice. For when you feel good about the overall story.
Full read plus a 5-page breakdown across all 10 pillars. For knowing how your script might do in competition or with reps.
Full read, 5-page breakdown across all 10 pillars, plus color-coordinated line-by-line proofreading. For when you’re ready to submit to reps.
You have an idea, a dream, and a pile of napkins and Post-its. We turn them into a script together over a two-week process.
Add-ons & extras
Need it back fast? Done — for a little extra.
A 30-minute video call added to your reading.
3 years of scripts, outlines, decks & textbooks. Free with any package.
Feature over 130pg or pilot over 70pg? I’ll read the whole thing.
Not sure which one you need?
Tell me where your script’s at — or ask about editing that isn’t a script — and I’ll point you the right way.